My small brother Abdun Nafey Matin (poetry)

[wasey82]

Hi guys,
Abdun Nafey Matin is my small brother, he is very fond of poetry, he has wrote some very nice poetry, he is only 10 years of age. His poetry are not that standard but i am posting his poems to encourage him. I hope you guys will encourage him too!!!

moghay to app say milna haya
app ko bhi mogh say milna hay
ham donoo ko aik dosray say milna hay
kabhi na kabhi to aik dosray say milna hay (Abdun Nafey Matin)

adaaby zindagi ko to dekhoo loogoo
adaaby zindagi may kya ltf att hay
hamay to bass zindagi may ltf ataa hay
agrr dekhna hay too adaaby zindagi dekhoo (Abdun Nafey Matin)

maan kia hay woo jaannt hay
bap bhi allah ki rahmat hay
maan bap say piar karoo
maan bap say piar karoo ( this is not his poetry he copied from somewhere)

[TrueLove]

nice work..try to continue

Bade miya ko is chote sayar ka salam:)

[Farishta]

I took some time to read the poetry since I ain't good at urdu
Haven't read the language in a while.
But it was nice to read ::pak f2::

[Fazi]

well if i keep in my mind he is 10 years old and i read this poem to me it sounds cute his feeling and his thoguhts .. interesting

[TrueLove]

Fazi@


it really sound good and im sure he's brith bron poet, by nature he should be very senstive.

[rehanahmed]

its good... thankx for sharing... chotay mian chah gaye

[wasey82]

Thanks everybody for giving such an encouraging comments. My brother was really very happy. He was showing all the replies to his friends and family members. He was saying that i will post my new poetry very soon. Special thanks to "fazi" for really nice comments :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif: . My brother liked that the most!!! :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif:

[Farishta]

From where do u guys make this stuff up

[NAIFAI]

ispar main sirf itna hi kehna chahoon ga

Shaairi khail naheen na hi ye tuk bandi hay
kuch bhi likhkar wah karna hi to khod pasandi hay

Tell him to become serious for it other wise leave it
shair khon-e-jigar say lijhtay hain agar aisay hi kuch bhi likhain aur shairi kehdain ye sahi naheen !
sorry for heartfeelings if there is any!

[wasey82]

Originally posted by NAIFAI
ispar main sirf itna hi kehna chahoon ga

Shaairi khail naheen na hi ye tuk bandi hay
kuch bhi likhkar wah karna hi to khod pasandi hay

Tell him to become serious for it other wise leave it
shair khon-e-jigar say lijhtay hain agar aisay hi kuch bhi likhain aur shairi kehdain ye sahi naheen !
sorry for heartfeelings if there is any!

yar ap ki awaz main to bara dard bhara hay. lagta hay ap ko dunay main bari chotain lagin hain. Yar waqai ya dunay bari zalim hay achay achoon ko tor phor ker rakh dayti hay. just joking yar
::th:: ::th::

[NAIFAI]

Originally posted by wasey82


yar ap ki awaz main to bara dard bhara hay. lagta hay ap ko dunay main bari chotain lagin hain. Yar waqai ya dunay bari zalim hay achay achoon ko tor phor ker rakh dayti hay. just joking yar
::th:: ::th::

Ye dard naheen sachai ki awaz hay ! aisee shairee parh kar to
dard bechara paraishan hay kahan say uthay
:)

[wasey82]

bhaijan wo 100 sala sanyasi baba nahi hay, 9 sal ka mera chota bhai hay. Ab 9 sal ka bach mirza galib jaisay sher kehnay say to raha. Albattah main apnay bhai say keh donga kay ab agar koi sher kahay to islah kay lia ustad mil gai hain. wo apnay sher ap ko rawana ker day ga

[Fazi]

Originally posted by wasey82
bhaijan wo 100 sala sanyasi baba nahi hay, 9 sal ka mera chota bhai hay. Ab 9 sal ka bach mirza galib jaisay sher kehnay say to raha. Albattah main apnay bhai say keh donga kay ab agar koi sher kahay to islah kay lia ustad mil gai hain. wo apnay sher ap ko rawana ker day ga

I like your answer

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[NAIFAI]

Originally posted by wasey82
bhaijan wo 100 sala sanyasi baba nahi hay, 9 sal ka mera chota bhai hay. Ab 9 sal ka bach mirza galib jaisay sher kehnay say to raha. Albattah main apnay bhai say keh donga kay ab agar koi sher kahay to islah kay lia ustad mil gai hain. wo apnay sher ap ko rawana ker day ga


I wrote my honest opinion ,heart feelings par maazrat!
waisay do u think that only 100 sala sanyasi baba hi shairi kar sakta hay:)
and yes I am here for islaah all the time. Good luck with him ::th::

[wasey82]

hum khail samjh ker lertay hain , toofan ki bhianak mojon say

Yar no heart feeling magar hum her cheese ko khail samjh ker pi jatay hain ::th:: ::th::

[tHeKiDnExTdOoR]

it was kinda hard to read it ...but its pretty good for a 10 years old...

[amjad_ali]

wasey man! MashAllah ur brother is very talented! SubhanAllah!

[wasey82]

Originally posted by amjad_ali
wasey man! MashAllah ur brother is very talented! SubhanAllah!

Thanks brother for the appreciations. This appreciation will encourage him for better work next time. Whenever he sees these appreciating comments he gets really happy.

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