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Captain
23rd March 2005, 18:19
[b]<span style="color:volet">i~*The Star*~

Written By Me</span>

<span style="color:brown">A star at night was shinning in the sky

There were many like him standing side by

But , i dont know what was in it - that

the more i saw it the more it attracted my eye

It was little and tiny twinkling slowly slowly

There had been ages since i wanted to cry</span>

In order to get rid of pain aching me inside

By looking at the star some how tears came in my eyes

I went to my bed and kept crying whole night

What was in that star which caught me so much?

What was in it that made me sigh



<span style="color:olive"> May be it was my loneliness and the distance between me and him

It was the shine he had and i was so dim

Or it was the seperation that feared me inside

It was a wish to be with him forever till i die

A longing to be like it to rise so high

Oh , it was the difference of earth and sky!</span>

<span style="color:indigo"> woh tara falaq ka mein mitti zameen ki

woh khamosh mohsin mein pagal kahin ki</span>

CricManiac
23rd March 2005, 21:48
another best poetry Captain good work!!! :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/strongbench.gif: :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/strongbench.gif: ::th:: ::th::

wasey82
26th March 2005, 03:14
nice :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif: :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif:

Fazi
26th March 2005, 23:56
nice

who_am_1
27th March 2005, 00:09
thank you captain for sharing app ki shayreee
nice one

Vicky19
27th March 2005, 00:22
hmm fine :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif: :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif:

TrueLove
28th March 2005, 11:37
Very nice ,

the last pragraf (secound section) really touching the heart.

Ashq Mile To Pee Lete Hain
Aap Kahe To Mar Jayen Hum
Aap Kahe To Jee Lete Hain
Hum To Hain Un Phoolon Jaise
Jo Kaaton Main Bhi Jee Lete Hain

well doen @ Captain

who_am_1
28th March 2005, 12:01
Hum To Hain Un Phoolon Jaise
Jo Kaaton Main Bhi Jee Lete Hain

nice one :style_emoticons/<#EMO_DIR#>/yes.gif:

Captain
29th March 2005, 16:24
thanx all of you....:) we cant edit our posts here?

DaPakiGuy
4th April 2005, 13:42
Very Nice ::th::